Rabu, 11 November 2009

before i met you
my heart so dark of love
don't care how people think about me
when my heart was so empty you came to my life

(you came to my life)

i feel my heart so full with love
i feel lonely (desperate and dark)
i feel my heart so full with love
i feel lonely (desperate and dark)

sometimes i feel hurt, cry, laugh, emotion
you hug me, you kiss me, make me feel warm
sometimes i feel hurt, cry, laugh, emotion
you hug me, you kiss me, make me feel warm

inside you

thanks for your love 3x

inside you

thanks for your love 3x

(i can't imagine, imagine without you
oh i say i can't imagine, imagine without you)

i love you so, i need you so, i love you so
i love you so, i need you so, i love you so

sometimes i feel hurt, cry, laugh, emotion
you hug me, you kiss me, make me feel warm
sometimes i feel hurt, cry, laugh, emotion
you hug me, you kiss me, make me feel warm

seperti hujan badai (lebay)

PR, tugas, ulangan udah kayak apaan tauuuuu..
banyaaaaaaaaaaknya minta ampun minta maap.
capek lahir batin, jiwa raga, jasmani dan rohani !
au ah gelap.

(posting gajelas)

Rabu, 04 November 2009

Sudut Pandang Orang Kedua

Pernah baca novel yang pake sudut pandang orang kedua gak?
kalo belom ya wajar aja, soalnya sudut pandang orang kedua jarang banget dipake buat bikin novel atau cerita lain.
kenapa eh kenapa? karna sudut pandang orang kedua itu ribeeeeeeeetnyaa minta ampuun.
kalo sudut pandang orang pertama sama ketiga mungkin kalian udah tau dan sering baca novel yg pake sudut pandang orang pertama sama ketiga.

nih contoh-contohnya..

  • Sudut pandang orang pertama
Pengarang seolah-olah menjadi tokoh utama dalam cerita. Contoh: Aku melihatnya dari kejauhan. Aku berlari menghampirinya dan memanggil namanya. Ia terlihat sangat terkejut melihatku ada disini.

  • Sudut pandang orang ketiga
Pengarang memposisikan dirinya hanya sebagai narator atau orang yang menceritakan tokoh-tokoh dalam cerita. Contoh: Riri melihat Dio dari kejauhan. Riri berlari menghampiri Dio dan memanggil Dio. Dio terlihat sangat terkejut melihat Riri ada disana.

nah kalo sudut pandang orang kedua gimana?

  • Sudut pandang orang kedua
contoh sudut pandang orang kedua (sepertinya kurang lebih kayak gini) : Seseorang melihatmu dari kejauhan. Orang itu berlari menghampirimu dan memanggil namamu. Kau terlihat sangat terkejut melihat orang itu disana.
jadi sudut pandang orang kedua itu pengarang cuma sebagai pencerita yang nyeritain si 'kamu' , tapi pengarangnya sendiri gak boleh nyebut dirinya sebagai 'aku' kayak gini 'aku berlari menghampirimu dan memanggil namamu', klo misalnya kaya gitu sudut pandangnya berubah jadi sudut pandang orang pertama. Jadi, 'aku' harus diganti sama 'seseorang', 'ibumu', 'ayahmu', dan sebagainya. ngerti gak? ngerti deh..

yaaa kurang lebih begitulaaah.
ribet kan? -__-

Siapa yg mau nyoba buat cerita pake sudut pandang orang kedua?

The best thing about tonight’s that we’re not fighting
Could it be that we have been this way before
I know you don’t think that I am trying
I know you’re wearing thin down to the core

But hold your breathe
Because tonight will be the night that I will fall for you
Over again
Don’t make me change my mind
Or I won't live to see another day
I swear it’s true
Because a girl like you is impossible to find
Your impossible to find

This is not what I intended
I always swore to you i’d never fall apart
You always thought that I was stronger
I may of failed
But I have loved you from the start

Oh, But hold your breathe
Because tonight will be the night that I will fall for you
Over again
Don’t make me change my mind
Or I won't live to see another day
I swear it’s true
Because a girl like you is impossible to find
It’s impossible

So breathe in so deep
Breathe me in
I’m yours to keep
And hold onto your words
Cause talk is cheap
And remember me tonight
When your asleep

Because tonight will be the night that I will fall for you
Over again

Don’t make me change my mind

Or I won't live to see another day

I swear it’s true

Because a girl like you is impossible to find


Tonight will be the night that I will fall for you

Over again

Don’t make me change my mind

Or I won't live to see another day

I swear it’s true

Because a girl like you is impossible to find

Your impossible to find

I’m staring at the glass in front of me
Is it half empty?
Have I ruined all you’ve given me?
I know I’ve been selfish
I know I’ve been foolish
But look through that and you will see
That I’ll do better
I know, baby I can do better


If you leave me tonight

I’ll wake up alone

Don’t tell me I will make it on my own

Don’t leave me tonight

This heart of stone will sink ’til it dies

If you leave me tonight

Sometimes I stare at you while you are sleeping
I listen to your breathing

Amazed how I somehow managed to

Sweep you off of your feet girl

Your perfect little feet girl

I took for granted what you do

But I’ll do better

I know, baby I can do better


If you leave me tonight

I’ll wake up alone

Don’t tell me I will make it on my own

Don’t leave me tonight

This heart of stone will sink ’til it dies

If you leave me tonight


And don’t you know

My heart is pumping

Oh, it’s putting up the fight

And I’ve got this feeling

That everything’s alright

Don’t you see?

I’m not the only one for you

But you’re the only one for me


If you leave me tonight

I’ll wake up alone


If you leave me tonight
I’ll wake up alone

Don’t tell me I will make it on my own

Don’t leave me tonight

This heart of stone will sink ’til it dies

If you leave me tonight

Don’t leave me tonight

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